Your story is super descriptive and thrilling. Something that could boost that feeling might be some subtle music of ambiance looping throughout the game. I also love your styling choices, the font pairs well with the narrative. I would be interested in seeing more imagery but I also think your descriptions are compelling enough. :3
I like the variety of choices for exploration and the mysterious atmosphere, though I might consider breaking the text into shorter passages so you don't have large blocks of text at one time
I really enjoyed the suspense and mystery of this game, the details made the story very immersive. My favorite aspect was the cause and effect concerning the ending, and the tragedy of one of the outcomes. Fantastic job!
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Your story is super descriptive and thrilling. Something that could boost that feeling might be some subtle music of ambiance looping throughout the game. I also love your styling choices, the font pairs well with the narrative. I would be interested in seeing more imagery but I also think your descriptions are compelling enough. :3
I like the variety of choices for exploration and the mysterious atmosphere, though I might consider breaking the text into shorter passages so you don't have large blocks of text at one time
I really enjoyed the suspense and mystery of this game, the details made the story very immersive. My favorite aspect was the cause and effect concerning the ending, and the tragedy of one of the outcomes. Fantastic job!